Jake brinksman from jb04156218
When Redrafting my final script I will take the feedback on bored and change my script to suit a wide audience. My feedback stated that I need to alter my script so I don't offend anyone. The show is targeted at young people and I need to alter the content to ensure it is suitable for this age range. I must also take care in ensuring that my comedy sketches do not offend anyone of any: gender, sexuality or race. The feedback tells me that because the production is on a budget I must remove some sets in my program and also narrow down the characters who are not needed.
I have decided that some sets are not needed and I have decided to remove scenes in the bedroom in the Santa Claus sketch to save on money. Also I have removed some characters from my second sketch who are not needed such as Simon's Grandma and Mr Deans.
I have also edited some characters so I do not cause offence to anyone. I have removed the black stereotype by also making Simon black and because I have removed Mr Deans and Simon's Grandma, all the characters in the second sketch are black. I have also changed the Mystery Sender's persona in the first sketch. Instead of him being a confident, overweight, hairy slob. He is now in fact a shy, nervous, well dressed man.
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